我很高的英语？I'm tall,so is my friend,but it's difference between my hair and his.I have short straight hair，那么，我很高的英语？一起来了解一下吧。
I have tall body最好改成I'm tall.然后再是I have……。 bananas, yellow, monkey的话三个放在一起没什么联系，从语法角度，是没错，但读起来不是很习惯。最好改成 I like bananas and monkey .my favourite color is yellow.
bedroom have a telephone It grey这句话存在问题，可以改为i have a telephone in the bedroom .the colour is Grey
你先看看这样，行不。不知道有些词汇运用是否超过三年级水平。我再帮你改改
Self introduction
Good morning my dearest judges. I’m honored to be here and I willing to make good use of this change. Now I’d like to introduction myself. You can call me Harry. I come from Yucai primary school. I have many subjects such as: Chinese Math English. I can do well in English and Math. I can speak English very well.
And I have some hobbies. I like playing football and running. Because they can make me strong. I also like reading, because it can be edifying. I am an outgoing boy who likes making friends what is more, I `m ready to help others. So I have got many friends.
Such is me a hard working and considerate boy. That’s all thank you.
例文
Myself （我自己）
My name is ChenXiaoye(陈小叶，参考一下，姓和名分开，姓和名首字母要大写）. I’m nine. I am tall（我很高）.I havetwo big eyes, two small ears and a small mouth. I like bananas . I am a happy boy.
I have a big bedroom.There is a greytelephone,two browndesks and two yellow chairsin my bedroom.（某地有某物用there be句型:某人有某物用have/has)
I have a big family. My grandfather is funny and heavy. He has an old face. He lovesapple. My grandmother is an old kindly lady(长的形容词放短的后面）. She has a big body. She loves grape. My father is tall and strong. He has a big month. He loves pineapple. My mother is pretty. She has athin body. She likes peach.
My teacher is tall and thin. She has athin body. SheteachesusEnglish. My friend is cute and naughty. He has two small eyes and two big ears. He likes mango.
The pet is a handsome cat . It has abig body and a long tail. It likes fish and mice.
I lovemy family.
希望能帮到您！
I have tall body
虽然没语法错误 但是还有点怪怪的 改成 I am tall.
I like bananas, yellow, monkey.
monkey 可数名词加 s
bedroom have a telephone It grey,
it grey 主谓宾 缺少一个谓语 is
two desk It a brown a yellow,
desk后加sIt a brown a yellow有点怪怪的 改成
This is brown and that is yellow.
and two chair It black.
改成 and two chairs It is black.
He love apple.
改成He loves apples.
还有很多 名词没有加s 第三人称也要加s
自己再看看吧
话说 LZ的作文好干瘪瘪的 毕竟你才三年级
多写点作文 多看点作文 多问问老师
好了 祝你学习进步哦
(看我码了这么多字 就采纳我的吧 谢谢咯)
I am rather tall and thin.
I am very tall andbony.
以上就是我很高的英语的全部内容，但读起来不是很习惯。最好改成 I like bananas and monkey .my favourite color is yellow.bedroom have a telephone It grey这句话存在问题，可以改为i have a telephone in the bedroom .the colour is Grey 你先看看这样，行不。不知道有些词汇运用是否超过三年级水平。内容来源于互联网，信息真伪需自行辨别。如有侵权请联系删除。
